UNNES
(Universitas Negeri Semarang) have seven Faculties. One of them is Languages
and arts Faculty. In the Faculty there are many Departments, and English
Department is the famous and favorite one. Every semester this Department has been certification from ISO. Beside, it
has many professional and competitive lecturer. There are two major of study
that are English Education and English Literature. English Education has more
number of students than English literature. English Department have many
Organisation that accommodate the students activity. There are ESA, d’soul,
EWC, Obsesi, and Mirror. All of the organisation has each specification on that
activity based on the students talent and interest.
This is a good writing. You've tried to describe about the English Department clearly. However, i still find some grammatical errors in your writing. For example, in your fifth sentence, you wrote "it has many professional and competitive lecturer." it should be "it has many professional and competitive lecturers".
BalasHapusSecond, you mentioned "There are two major" it should be ""There are two majors".
"more number" should be "more numbers".
Then, in your eighth sentence, you wrote "English Department have many Organisation that accommodate the students activity." it should be "English Department has many organizations that accommodate the students activities."
The last, maybe you can separate two last sentences to another paragraph. Thanks.
thanks for your comment :)
BalasHapus